Well done my friend! I like the first sentence in your introduction. I had to read it a couple of extra times to figure it out. Your introduction was a perfect lead-in to your narritive. It kind of seemed like your writing was lacking a conclusion or something to finish it out. You kind of remind me of Spongebob working at The Krusty Krab.
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Well done my friend! I like the first sentence in your introduction. I had to read it a couple of extra times to figure it out. Your introduction was a perfect lead-in to your narritive. It kind of seemed like your writing was lacking a conclusion or something to finish it out. You kind of remind me of Spongebob working at The Krusty Krab.
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